下は私のスビーチです。私は自分のスビーチを聞いて、あまり好きじゃありませんでした。たぶんもっとれんしゅをしたほうがいいでしょうね。 I think that in some parts of the speech, I am not quite familiar with my own speech so that even though I know the content of which I was talking about, but could not follow the grammatically correct sentences I put down earlier. Therefore, I made a couple of gaps and ambiguous repetitions. Second, I think the subject is not fully well developed as there are still spaces that could be filled. Additionally , the transition between my reasons of liking anime in childhood and later did not associates the two close enough so that the listeners might get a little confused. Neverthless, I think that also the intonation is a little strange between here and there, but as a whole, I think that the intonation and fluency was alright. anyway, enough is said, here is my speech: |
2007年4月10日火曜日
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Good job on your skit.
Your fluency and pronunciation were good - you sound like you could be a native speaker (Chinese probably helps with that).
One problem that I noticed was that you tend to re-say things: you'll say a sentence and then repeat half of it. I think that this might be because you're forming thoughts while you speak. Maybe a couple more practices outloud would help with that.
Otherwise, good job.
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